Phone ringing…
“Amma…I already told you I am driving back home.” said pratyusha frustrated.
Angrily, Mrs. Subramanyam disconnected the call!
Later when Mrs. Subramanyam is out-of-town…
“Papa, isn’t it 2 days since amma called?” pratyusha wondered!
She kept calling amma but in vain!
“This is not so like amma, usually a day doesn’t go by without her calls. I hope she is alright!” worried Pratyusha…
“How worried amma would have been on all those days when I missed her calls” she thought.
She felt a jolt as her phone rang; ‘Amma Calling’!
“You dint call me since 2 days Amma! I tried calling you many times, you did not answer” she questioned.
“We were not allowed to carry our phone into the temple beta… and …” Mrs. Subramanyam continued…
Pratyusha smiled feeling relieved and happy!
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Ah! We all worry like this 🙂 sweet and short one Keerthi!
Well, that was a good ending to the story!!!
Thank you for the read Alice ?
Ah that tugs the strings of my heart – while at work I do that at times to my Dad but this makes think
This was my story 🙂 I just changed the name of characters to keep it more fictional! Thanks for the read Akshata 🙂 I am glad you liked it.
Yea I thought as much!
I exhaled only at the end! Glad you ended it the way you did, Keerthi!
A story we can all identify with. Loved reading the well written story.
I am glad you liked it 🙂 Thanks for the read 😀
Sweet post which shows the love we feel for our loved ones through our impatience and worry. All the best with Alexa Keerthi
I am glad you liked it Shalz 🙂 Thank you 😀
Such a beautifully written piece, Keerthi. Mother’s love is the purest form of love and you’ve beautifully portayed it thru this post. Love the simplicity in conveying such a heart warming message.
Thank you Saumy 🙂
Aw that was the cutest. Somedays we need to exchange places with our mums to understand what they go through.
Very nice Keerthi, loved the end. Happy ALexa Season.
Thank u Tina 🙂 I am glad you liked it!
Sometimes all people need is a little empathy & perspective. 🙂
Thanks for participating in Chatty Blogs. Always a pleasure to see your posts in the Linky. 🙂
Thank you shanaya! Glad you liked it ? also thanks for stopping by.
Loved the role reversal Keerthi. I love it too when my kids complain I don’t pick up the phone…. sweet revenge for the days I’ve worried about them 😉
Wow thats so cute and lovely! I am glad you liked it! Thanks for dropping by and leaving your imprints 🙂
Parents bother about us but sometimes we do not respect that. It happens with each generation. Story of Parents…Sigh
Such a sweet n short true heart touching I loved the way u ended it 🙂
Thanks a lot ruchi! This was something happened with me and my mom, i changed the names just to keep it more fictional.
I can completely relate to it not only as a daughter but also as a mom. Beautifully written and I liked the way you described mom and daughters relationship in a short and sweet tale.
I am glad you liked it! Thanks for stopping by and also for showing appreciation 🙂
Mom and daughter relationship is depicted so well. You are a good story teller.
It feels great when i receive such love through comments! Thanks a lot for stopping by and sharing ur feedback 😀 It means a lot to me!
Indeed! Thanks for stopping by and sharing ur thoughts Upasna 🙂
It’s a lovely relation between mother and daughter. Nice story Keerthi.
I am glad you liked it ramya. Thanks for stopping by 🙂
This was very lovely… A mother-daughter relationship is portrayed in a very sweet and way 🙂
Thank you Shamik for stopping by and showing ur appreciation 🙂
i do this to my mom too. Eye opener. Thanks for this Keerthi.
Thanks a lot Aesha for dropping by 🙂
I so relate to your story. There are days when I do not bother to call my mom and when I do call I get really worried if she doesnt pick up the phone.
Yeah Happens with me all the time! Thanks a lot for stopping by 🙂
Awww that’s so beautiful. That is exactly how I and mom behave too at times.
Same goes with me and my mom too 🙂 Thanks a lot for stopping by!
It happened with me once. I was traveling and i said ill call you back mom in 10 min and I forgot to call her hole day. At evening i was trying to cll her but she was not picking up..
but at last my uncle was here then I talked to mom. The phone got damaged that’s why she was not picking up.
Only when we go through the same we understand the pain indeed! It was my story as well changed the in the post to keep it more fictional.
Thanks for stopping by! 🙂
You’re welcome. And seriously you’re writing a great blog and posts ????❤️?? i love them
Thanks a lot! I feel Humbled 🙂
Do you use IG??for this blog ??
U mean Instagram?
Yeah
nah! not yet…
Okay
Touching story about a love between a mother and daughter 🙂
Thanks a lot 🙂 I am glad that you liked it!
very nice heart touchy post.
love it.
Thanks a lot 🙂